Y5 Edit and Improve

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In Year 5 we have been using peer assessment to edit and improve our work in red pen.

Here, Mackenzie’s work has been edited with improved vocabulary, punctuation, expanded noun phrases and relative clauses (all Year 5 grammar targets).

Some fantastic improvements have been shown by all children. Well done Year 5!

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